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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can couse serious social problmes, as well as practical problmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The trend of settling abroad is becoming popular these days,
people
 tend to face lot many difficulties when it comes to getting a hold of the
country
’s native
language
, but there is a significant part that still feels that there is no difficulty in
this
. I personally feel that getting to know a new
language
 has more pros
then
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than
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 cons which would be discussed in
this
 essay.
First
 and foremost, when someone is living in a new
country
, he or she tends to learn their
language
 beforehand in order to get along with
people
 living there so that they won’t face any difficulties in the way of communication with other
people
.
This
further
 gives them the confidence in building new connections with natives living in the
country
.
For instance
, a number of
people
 from India move to Canada each year but they move out with the confidence of staying in a different
country
 and after being competent enough in order to survive in a totally new place they are moving into.
Also
, life in a new
country
 is always tedious for one who is coming from another
country
 but the same
language
also
 becomes a pillar of strength when someone new is coming and starting to live there. Natives of the
country
 are always supportive in giving a helping hand even if a person is not fully equipped with their native
language
,
thus
 with the course of ,time all
such
 barriers tend to disappear. There is no
such
 big deal even if a person is not fully aware of a foreign
language
 of a particular
country
. In conclusion, speaking a different
language
 boosts the morale of an individual and
also
 tends to help the person in making genuine social connections which in my notion is no barrier.
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