Some people think computers and the Internet are more important in child’s education. Others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, computers and the

internet

have become essential things in our life. In some cases,

computer

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computers

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and

internet

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the internet

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are replacing

teachers

and schools. In fact, certain people argue that the former is more important in children's education while others believe that schools and

teachers

are unreplaceable.

This

essay will discuss both

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of

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and gives a personal opinion.s

To begin

with, the

internet

and computers are paramount tools for

students

. To explain, in today's time, most pupils use technological devices to

study

their academic material and find some extra useful information on the

internet

.

Therefore

, it helps them to increase their efficiency and make the

study

process become easier.

For example

, if a student

encounter

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some hard math problems and does not know how to solve

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, he could find some explanation on youtube or other websites.

Moreover

, using

iPad

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an iPad

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to take

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notes

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and sort

out

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them out

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it

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is more effective compared to a paper.

On the other hand

, the school and

teachers

play a pivotal role in education as well. To elaborate, the duty of a teacher is to impart knowledge and give general guidelines to

students

, in

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, they make sure that

students

study

the right things and use effective methods.

For instance

, for an individual that has to

study

law, there are myriad

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acquaintances that probably will confuse them, in

this

case, the teacher can help them to have a clear mind and make the

study

process more systematic.

In addition

,

teachers

play the supervisor's role, it is important for youth that

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few

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self-control. In conclusion, even though some people think that

internet

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the internet

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and

computer

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the computer

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are more important than the school and

teachers

, In my opinion, I believe that these factor and not rivals but one complement the other

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. To be more specific, the

internet

and computers support

students

to

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acquire

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acquire

knowledge but school and teacher cannot lack.