Friendships can be very meaningful and special, but also very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?
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of any
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and their characteristics, so I will represent qualities
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the qualities
friends
and factors that affects
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affect
relationship
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an endurance
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these
characteristics
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friendship
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the
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people
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friends
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difficult
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a difficult
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situations
For example
, when I was suffering covid-19, my friend Shahid was beside me all the time, despite knowing the risk.
Secondly
, jolly minded
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persons
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people
friends
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a friend
he
never critically think about Correct pronoun usage
they
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matter which make long
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friendship
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beings
but
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one
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of the greatest bad habit, which discrete Correct your spelling
one
relationship
, even
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and even
also
, not only that but also
communication. When people
do not communicate properly then
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the
relationship
gradually detached.
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an important
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our life so we should Change preposition
of
nurtured
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nurture
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bond to create more endurance even we should create our mind to cecrifice
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sacrifice
help
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helps
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