Government should spend money on railways rather than roads What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Trains are
crucial
part of each Add an article
a crucial
realms
and Change to a singular noun
realm
government
should invest money Correct article usage
the government
on
Change preposition
in
railways
rather than roads. Because there is no traffic
jam
and it cheapest transportation
system
.
Almost every nation facing
Wrong verb form
faces
traffic
jam
nowadays and it becomes Fix the agreement mistake
jams
nightmare
for Add an article
a nightmare
public
because they cannot reach Add an article
the public
in
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apply
the
destination on time. Many job holders, Change the word
their
therefore
, losing
their jobs. In order to tackle Wrong verb form
lose
this
problem administration should build a
Correct the article-noun agreement
railways
a railway
railways
because there is no traffic
because because
that has Remove the redundancy
apply
one way
road Add a hyphen
one-way
system
and that's why there is no traffic
jam
. The member of the societies, consequently
, will be able to reach in
Change preposition
apply
the
destination on time. Namely, a survey of Change the word
their
Engineering
centre showed that approximately 87% Correct article usage
the Engineering
Japanese
citizens are using trains.
Every Change preposition
of Japanese
countries
have Change to a singular noun
country
middle class
families in Add a hyphen
middle-class
this
world and these
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this families'member
families'member
cannot afford Correct your spelling
families member
families members
the
personal vehicles and they Correct article usage
apply
are always prefer
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always prefer
cheapest
Correct article usage
the cheapest
transportation
system
. In addition
, if government build a
Correct the article-noun agreement
railways
a railway
railways
it will be beneficial for them many people will able
to use that because Add a missing verb
be able
that is
so cheap then
other Correct your spelling
than
transportation
systems, such
as,
taxi, bike, car and so on. Remove the comma
apply
This
transportation
system
will be budget friendly for the public and they will able to visit or transport goods for business one
place to another and eventually they will help to elevate Change preposition
from one
GDP
of these countries. Correct article usage
the GDP
For example
, every developed countries
are providing Change to a singular noun
country
cheapest
Correct article usage
the cheapest
transportation
system
to the
citizen.
In conclusion, Change the word
its
administration
should spend more money on Add an article
the administration
railways
, because there is no traffic
jam
and it will be cheaper than Fix the agreement mistake
jams
other
Change the wording
another transportation system
other transportation systems
transportation
system
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