1. Write a letter of request for funding from faculty

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Dear sir or madam, I am a senior resident physician in your hospital. I am writing

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with regard to the release of funds , which were allocated by the state to upgrade the maternity ward of the institution. As you know ,

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part of the hospital is located in the old wing of our medical facility and there are only 20 beds available for the patients and they face paucity most of the time.

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, many practitioners who worked in

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ward requested a renovation and extension of the department in past years

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but much could not be done about

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demand, as at that time the main emphasis was to construct a new OPD block. As we all know, the new OPD has become operational

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month,

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, now it is our humble request to the management to allocate funds for the necessary changes in the maternity block so that we can serve our patients without any difficulty. I hope the faculty would give wise consideration to the above topic. Looking forward to hearing a positive revert from your side. Yours Faithfully,

parmarjas3Sun Nov 20 2022

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The Greeting

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Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

185 words

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1. Write a letter of request for funding from faculty

The Greeting

Most countries want to improve standard of living through economic development,however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

it is believed that children from countries with high level of unemployment should be offered only primary education and should noy be offered secondary education as it unlikely that they will get a job in the future anyway. do you agree or disagree?

Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

Many young people do not know how to manage their money when graduating high school. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to teach them this important skill?