In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?

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think that even though young

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have achievements like being wealthier ,healthier and living longer , they are still depressed. It is believed that there are many reasons for

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it should be tackled by a

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of solutions. There are two compelling reasons that make the younger generation become richer,healthier and live longer.

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, there are more dramatic changes in modern life like higher workloads and higher incomes which attract young

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. They almost work hard without spending time on

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or travel .

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work in global companies with high pressures to be promoted by the company.

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, they don't have enough private time to take

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rest at home.

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youngsters

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were affected by becoming wealthy through social media.

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influence makes

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think more and do more jobs to spend assets as they can. somehow, these assets might not bring happiness

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them.

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riches

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richers

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the richers

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owned many properties and money when they got old.

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, some of them could not be blissful because nobody shared these successes with them. Some measures ought to be taken to resolve these prospective issues

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youngsters

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should think carefully about their desirable goals which make them happy.

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they could balance between work and private life.In fact, the government implements

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holidays

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policy for the public.

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can have time to stay with their family and friends which

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them stress out and create more happiness. A

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of

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can take part in art courses like painting ,

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handmade

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and handmade

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crafts.

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spirit courses for

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who seek satisfaction in their spirit. In conclusion, while

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youngsters

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become richer,healthier and live longer, they could forget some true values of life they should have, it still has various solutions for them to balance it.