What are advantage and disadvantages of immigration ?

Some
people
move into
to
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another
country
for different reasons.
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discuss developing
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their knowledge as one of the main advantages of
this
and
secondly
, creating psychological problems as one of the main disadvantages. One of the main positive points of going to university to continue
education
might lead to deciding
for
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immigration
also
some
people
for getting
education
funds doing emigrate
such
as Ge.
For example
, Canada and USA provide them
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equipped universities, knowledgeable professors and
high tech
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facilities that tempt some
of
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the
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science seekers. On other hand, Germany
with
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offering funds can absorb many of these immigrants. In
this
country
for
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graduate
education
paid funds for students and
education
is usually free.
This
has resulted in some of the
people
for
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developing in
education
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out of their home
country
. The main disadvantage of
this
phenomenon might cause starting psychological issues in some
people
. Settling (living) in a new
country
and being far from their family might lead to
this
hassle. Cambridge University found in a recent study that the
people
who immigrate to
UK
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get depressed by 20%.
Moreover
, some other reasons
such
as economic pressure and unknown culture might grow
this
problem for some of them.
This
results in immigration might bring about forming psychological problems. In conclusion, the benefits immigrate to
other
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another country
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country
,
such
as developing
education
, must be weighed against the drawbacks,
such
as psychological
sufferings
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. Overall, the benefits outweigh the disadvantages because going
in
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a developed
country
might bring about developing
education
that can not be in a developing
country
.
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