people use things in a short time then throw them away. What are its causes and what are its problems? What could be done to address this issue?

Nowadays, a significant number of
people
are using stuff in a short time and
then
throwing it away. In
this
essay, I describe the possible causes and problems and address the solutions as well. 
First
, these days, the majority of kids are growing up in a well and wealthy conditions unaware of the
things
other children are suffering from.
Therefore
, they do not realize the value of
things
they own and
instead
of using or even giving them to someone else they just throw them away.  Sadly, many kids are experiencing poverty while other children do not consider
this
condition and are ungrateful. 
For example
, kids in modern countries are in a much better situation rather than in
third
-world countries, so, they never understand the value of stuff. To solve
this
problem, we can teach them at school, to not throw away anything they have or at least help somebody else.
Second
, we cannot ignore the effect of social media on
people
's behaviour, since, the human being is able to have the access to other's life, we can surely say by being influenced by social media,
people
are just buying
things
and when they are satisfied they just let them go.
Thus
, just randomly buying stuff can seriously damage the environment as many
things
we use are made of plastics. One of the solutions to solve
this
problem is using influencers and obligating them to warn the public about the environment. In conclusion, a lot of
people
use
things
in a short time and
then
throw them away. In
this
essay, I mentioned the causes, problems its makes and solutions.
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