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Band 7.5

A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give details of the course you took at the university. • explain why you recommend the university. • give some advice about how to apply.

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Dear Sam, I'
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 so excited to receive your letter after a long time and know that you are interested in applying to my
university
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 and prefer the Chemistry department. I'
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 sure you'll really enjoy the subject as I'
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 doing the same and I am sharing a few of my experiences. It is a 4-year graduate course with a total of 8 semesters in total 4 years and classes start just after admission.
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, I am proud of my
university
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 for many positive reasons. You will be glad to hear that, the
university
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 has a student-friendly environment with digital classrooms, enriched laboratories and a well-organized library.
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, we have very a good student dormitory with all modern facilities including 3 times meals a day. If I were you, I would not have any headaches about residence and would get admitted here
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 giving you relevant application information.
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, you've to collect the admission notice from the
university
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 website where you will get the address link for applying.
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, you should provide the required data with soft copy attachments
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 press the submit button.
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, a confirmation of acceptance email will be sent to you and you need to wait for the final admission message. I hope your dream will come true very soon! Do not forget to let me know your experience. Best of luck Shoaib

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coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single, clear idea to improve the clarity of your writing. Consider revising the introduction to give a brief overview of the course before diving into details.
task achievement
Add more personal insights or specific reasons for why you recommend the university. This can make your recommendation more persuasive and engaging.
coherence and cohesion
The letter is well-structured with clear sections for each part of the prompt, and it maintains a friendly and encouraging tone throughout.
task achievement
You provided relevant details about the course and the university, which shows a good understanding of the task requirements.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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