At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In some states, there is no balance between the
number
of older individuals
and young adults. However
, these days, many countries consist of a large number
of younger individuals
rather than the elderly. Although
, having a more young community rather than an old one has not only advantages both also
disadvantages, the drawbacks them outweigh.
First
of all, some young individuals
cannot meet their own needs because they do not work anywhere. In the other words, The main disadvantage is that as the basic needs of the young community are met by the government, some financial collapse can occur such
as reducing exports, and increasing young population investments (education, health services or sports). Thus
, these countries likely are undeveloped. For instance
, Nepal the country in which the youth population is the highest prioritizes funds for their young people instead
of exports.
Secondly
, one possible benefit is that in these countries, the unemployment rate is higher than in others due to the lack of jobs to accommodate the young population. Moreover
, national income per person decreases so the welfare level of society reduces. For example
, in Turkey, there is no number
of jobs enough for the young. Thus
, employment problem arises.
To conclude, currently, compared to the number
of elderly individuals
, certain nations have a community that is
disproportionately made up of young adults. However
, this
situation has some downsides such
as the absence of jobs for young people and having trouble meeting basic needs. Furthermore
, it is predictable that the number
of young people will increase over time.Submitted by bengisuzeynep7510 on
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