At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In some states, there is no balance between the
number
of older Use synonyms
individuals
and young adults. Use synonyms
However
, these days, many countries consist of a large Linking Words
number
of younger Use synonyms
individuals
rather than the elderly. Use synonyms
Although
, having a more young community rather than an old one has not only advantages both Linking Words
also
disadvantages, the drawbacks them outweigh.
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First
of all, some young Linking Words
individuals
cannot meet their own needs because they do not work anywhere. In the other words, The main disadvantage is that as the basic needs of the young community are met by the government, some financial collapse can occur Use synonyms
such
as reducing exports, and increasing young population investments (education, health services or sports). Linking Words
Thus
, these countries likely are undeveloped. Linking Words
For instance
, Nepal the country in which the youth population is the highest prioritizes funds for their young people Linking Words
instead
of exports.
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Secondly
, one possible benefit is that in these countries, the unemployment rate is higher than in others due to the lack of jobs to accommodate the young population. Linking Words
Moreover
, national income per person decreases so the welfare level of society reduces. Linking Words
For example
, in Turkey, there is no Linking Words
number
of jobs enough for the young. Use synonyms
Thus
, employment problem arises.
To conclude, currently, compared to the Linking Words
number
of elderly Use synonyms
individuals
, certain nations have a community Use synonyms
that is
disproportionately made up of young adults. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
situation has some downsides Linking Words
such
as the absence of jobs for young people and having trouble meeting basic needs. Linking Words
Furthermore
, it is predictable that the Linking Words
number
of young people will increase over time.Use synonyms
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