Some people believe the benefit of tourism outweigh the problems it creates in a particular place. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Tourism

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industry is one of the

the

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growing industries in today’s world. Some argue that the beneficial aspects of it exceed the adverse effects. I entirely agree with

this

statement and will attempt to explain both sides in the following paragraphs. The

first

the foremost advantage of

tourism

is acting as an economic driver. To elaborate, it helps the economy grows rapidly by creating job opportunities for local people.

For instance

, the areas related to travel namely hotels, car agencies, touring companies and souvenir shops, required

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workforce.

As a result

of

this

employment, the community’s economy can grow widely. The

second

positive point

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to the mind is

development

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the development

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of the

country

due to tourist arrivals. Governments should facilitate their arrivals and make the

country

looks more attractive.

For example

, by providing better and more convenient public

transportations

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or by improvement of infrastructures

such

as roads and highways, which

also

have significant impacts on the citizens’ lives. There are

also

some adverse effects to

tourism

if a

country

does not make solutions.

Firstly

, the environmental damage

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van

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be

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mentioned, which has a great influence on residents’ surroundings. Imagine crowded sightseeing places, the Carbone dioxide gases produced by

use

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of

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aircraft

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air craft

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, cars and other transportation will lead to air pollution. Another negative point might be cultural. To expand, some people

instead

of respecting different beliefs and traditions

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will find a way to disrespect these customs. Take an Islamic

country

as an example, the dress code in these societies

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different

than

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European

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countries which may cause major problems for both parties. To sum up,

tourism

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the tourism

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sector is a flourishing industry that brings more benefits than cons

although

some people are against

this

idea.

nevertheless

, I totally agree that the pros of

tourism

due to the economical reasons and the way it made local lives more comfortable surpass the cons as there are always solutions to difficulties.