Your next door neighbor owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: oYour reason for writing oWhat you would like to happen oA nice, respectful style.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to bring to your attention the amount of disturbance caused by your dog at all hours of the day, keeping my family awake throughout the night.
Firstly
, I have been unable to get a good night
sleep for the past two weeks. Change noun form
night's
As a result
, my output has been affected at my job site. I fear that my inefficiency at work will cause me to lose my job.
Secondly
, the continuous barks of your pup is
Change the verb form
are
also
affecting the sleep of my two-year-old daughter
who easily gets awakened by the sound of any noise. As I am sure you are aware of the importance of a
full rest for a toddler to grow adequately.
I am aware that Remove the article
apply
this
has only been going on recently. This
makes me to
believe that the canine needs a visit to the vet as there might be an underlying health issue.
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apply
Moreover
, I could also
give you the contact of one of the best puppy trainers . He will teach your dog how to control his barks.
I am sure you understand the importance of one's sleep. It is my hope that my suggestions will be taken seriously and we can all get a peaceful neighbourhood.
Sincerely yours,
John BrownSubmitted by jackielynn0611 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single, clear idea to enhance readability and coherence.
coherence cohesion
Consider creating a logical progression of ideas to further improve the overall structure. For instance, addressing the personal impact first followed by proposed solutions could add clarity.
task achievement
You have provided a full response to the task, addressing all the required points: reasons for writing, what you would like to happen, and maintaining a respectful tone.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is respectful and polite, which is crucial for maintaining good neighborly relations.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately done, contributing to a polite and formal letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.