In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

There are some claims that in the
next
years all kinds of
transportation
will be without a
driver
and travellers will be the only people inside the mean of
transportation
. It must be admitted that
such
development has many positive and negative effects. in my own view, I think it would have a great benefit to our world as I am going to illustrate here. Technology or artificial intelligence is going to be our
driver
in our future journeys.
As a result
, it could have technical errors which may lead to accidents and an increase in mortality rates.
For example
, if the driving
system
faced a situation and it has to choose the passengers’ safety or other car’s safety, What would the
system
select? neither the passengers nor the other car is the right answer because they both are worth saving. Another argument would be the absence of emotions In the
system
that dominates our journey.
For instance
, If a passenger had a heart attack, would the vehicle stop immediately to seek medical help? or a series of steps should be done
first
? and maybe it is too late after finishing these steps. turning to the other side of the argument, driverless cars or buses will cost less especially in public
transportation
. Allowing authorities to spend more money on other sectors that might need
further
attention and funding. For individuals, driving is an exhausting job as a person is required to sit behind the wheel for a long time which could lead to plenty of health issues in
his
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or her back. By driverless
transportation
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humans will have better job opportunities and will not have to sit for a long period deriving to earn a living or even to commute. where there is light there is
also
shadow I mentioned earlier that emotions can have a negative impact while driving but let us imagine a
driver
that has not
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ability to get tired, worried, exhausted or even confused. I believe the absence of all these negative feelings would improve the quality of handling the journey and
also
reduce the risk of potential errors. To conclude, using
transportation
methods without a human
driver
has loads of advantages that would enhance our lives.
In addition
to several disadvantages that should be considered while designing the
system
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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