You visit a cafe every day. Write a letter to the manager of the cafe. In your letter - Say what you like about the cafe - Suggest an improvement to the cafe - Explain the benefits of your suggestion.

Dear Sir or Madam, Hope

this

letter finds you well. I am Laila Khaled, and I am a regular customer of your reputable cafeteria. I am writing

this

letter to express my admiration and satisfaction regarding the quality of service in your cafe and recommend some changes as well. The

first

point I would like to raise is the quality of served food. Despite being allergic to some sorts of cuisines,

this

place has always been able to amuse me with the variety of food.

Furthermore

, its quiet and relaxing atmosphere is perfect for long conversations with friends. Another thing I forgot to mention is the areas of development. Not only does the lighting system need to be amplified, but

also

the staff ought to be more polite and welcoming. One final point I would like to discuss with you is that these ameliorations will attract more customers from different age categories to

this

cafe.

Moreover

, I am a staunch believer that without these simple steps,

this

place could not have been a stunning cafe. Looking forward to reading

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your reply about what actions you intended to take. Should there be any queries, kindly feel free to contact me

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Faithfully, Laila Khaled