The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter. * Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly. * Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors. * Suggest what should be done about the problem.

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you regarding the improper service of

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collection in the backstreet of the area. Due to several reasons, it has happened.

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, there is only one

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collector near my area who collects

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Secondly

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, he is not punctual.

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, he is very rude.

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has impacted our whole surroundings' life in danger due to so many black flies and mosquitoes which gather around the

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because it is not being collected for two days. As a consequence,

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week one of my neighbours was bitten by a typhoid mosquito bite her and she suffered from typhoid which got worse due to their old age resulting in her hospitalization. There are some solutions to solve it which I would like to mention there could be more

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collectors for the backstreet as in case one is not coming

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the alternate option could be used and

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should have put the penalties which

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not their duties according to the time. Hopefully! my suggestion would be noticeable. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Radhika Sharma

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

waste management
sanitation services
litter accumulation
refuse collection
debris overflow
bin collection
hygiene hazards
vermin infestation
aesthetic degradation
municipal services
rectification measures
implementation
efficiency
accountability
proactive steps

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