some people think that to be successful in sports, physical strength is the most important factor. Others, however, think that it is more important to be mentally strong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is often argued by a few audiences that physical power is very much essential to be a successful person in a play.
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, others argue that mental stability is the most important requirement. I agree with both the opinions of the crowd and would like to express my notion in the below essay.
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of the most prominent requirements of an athletic human is to be physically fit. Many people from play backgrounds need to have enough courage to perform well in the games they actively involve in and they need to be super fit and give their best in the sport. Many games
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have separate coaching academies to strengthen the sports personality's fitness and make them ready for the game.
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cricket
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is
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of the most famous sports in
INDIA
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and BCCI is a council which is the council for conducting
cricket
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matches in
INDIA
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for their fitness there is a coaching centre named National
Cricket
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Academy in the city named Bangalore which is in the southern part of
India
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and it
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trains youngsters who aim to become a cricketer in the
India
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cricket
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team.Many top
cricket
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players like Rohit Sharma trained here and
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had many fitness tests whenever he had injuries.
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, these instances prove the fact that physical strength is very very necessary for top athletes.
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, mental strength is very much prominent not only for sports people
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for every individual to be very good in society.
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, Virat Kohli,
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of the greatest of all time in the game of
cricket
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lost his form and did not perform well for a year and there was a lot of trolling about him. He was mentally strong and worked hard during his practice sessions and after a year, he scored a century in
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of the T-20 international games and made all the troller's mouths shut.
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, I would like to conclude that both physical and mental strengths are needed for an athlete to be a successful sport.
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