Some people believe more actions can be done to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. What is your opinion?

Some
people
think we can do something to reduce
crime
such
as
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police
patrols,
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anti-
crime
advertisements or
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some strange
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and
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to
netizen
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netizens
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on the internet etc. Others think we have done so many things about them but the rate of
crime
not reduce significantly. Personally,
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these things can help us pay more attention to
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self-defense
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of
crime
. Today,
crime
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various aspects, theft,
violent
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and cybercrime and so on. Governments have
been
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designed many
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or
policy
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policies
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to protect
peoples
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right. Many countries organized
police
for
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, when
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someone
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some one
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someone
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attacked on
internet
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police
will contact them immediately or shield signal from hikers. As for cybercrime
police
will publish information about
strategies
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of them.
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this
way,
people
will improve their understanding
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these strategies and deter criminals’
behaviors
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. If criminals
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same
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ways to grasp
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money
this
is
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way to guarantee
people
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safety.
In addition
, many criminals simulate officer or manager contact with students at random by phone, social media etc. Because of that, many platforms
such
as Alipay, Taobao and Tiktok published
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information for
protection
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of the public.
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this
way, when
people
calling with a person that
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no idea of them, they must
should
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be made sure the identification of them.
Although
many
issue
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issues
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or policy information
have
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been published. They can protect
people
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safety in some
aspect
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. But some things happened the
people
will be changed,
criminals
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and criminals
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will update their strategies and tools in the future. So,
police
and governments
also
promote their ways to
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it
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. All in all,
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something impossible to protect full
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people
, but do-nothing
people
will be more harmful
then
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something.
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