Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is often argued that with so much suffering in the human population these days, it is wrong to use up precious resources on

animals

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. Taking the example of the tiger, proponents of

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view say that to encourage tiger populations to increase in areas farmed by

humans

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would be morally wrong because peoples’ livelihoods would be destroyed for the sake of an animal. The tigers will hunt livestock and, given the chance,

humans

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as well.

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, where there is competition between

humans

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and

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in a given habitat, it is right that

humans

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should win. The point is

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made that, over millennia, certain

species

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have disappeared while others have flourished, and that we should allow nature to take its course and let failing

species

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die out. In fact, it is suggested that protecting vulnerable

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damages the ecology of the earth because only the fittest should survive. I agree that human life is always of greater value than animal life.

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, I feel that trying to save any creature from extinction enhances human existence

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because our lives would be diminished if fascinating and beautiful creatures

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as tigers or elephants were lost forever.

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, being the most powerful creature on the planet means that we have a moral and ethical duty to care for weaker

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, even less-appealing

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such

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as insects and amphibians should be preserved, because maintaining different

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promotes biodiversity. It is possible,

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, that scientists might be able to find products from these

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of benefit to

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as medicines or fertilisers. On balance, I feel that every effort should be made to save as many

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as possible, for practical and moral as well as aesthetic reasons.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

289 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

endangered species
biodiversity
intrinsic value
existential threat
ecosystem
conservation
economic benefits
funding allocation
competing needs

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Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some pp believe that public buildings should be moved out ò the city to promote citizen's well being and better economic growing, while some argue that the planning will cause more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, it is easy to sell, buy and work with others through the internet. But others are against it. Do you think this is a positive trend or a negative trend?