Teleworking has been on the increase in recent years. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Today, working within virtual spaces is trending among worker society.
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is a good trend and Linking Words
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brings
benefit
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benefits
give
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gives
more
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them more
time
to focus on what is important.
Working virtually can save more Use synonyms
time
and make individuals more productive. The saved Use synonyms
time
can be used to do more tasks. Use synonyms
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a metropolitan
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cities
city
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cities
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people
usually spend Use synonyms
time
more than 1 hour just to commute from their home to the office. Use synonyms
People
used to meet another person to discuss something that can be discussed by call or video call. Today, Zoom and Google Meet can facilitate an online meeting that can save minutes or even hours Use synonyms
due to
moving from one place to another place just to attend an offline meeting. Workers could be more productive if they Linking Words
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in
jam
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15 minutes of
meeting. Correct your spelling
15-minute
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will be spent on something unproductive and give employees more Use synonyms
time
to focus on their Use synonyms
job
.
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also
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among
society. Less Change preposition
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time
to do something more after office hours. Use synonyms
Thus
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people
can have more quality Use synonyms
time
for their loved ones. Use synonyms
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people
can immediately meet with their family or their friends and spend the Use synonyms
time
to do something more fun like watching a movie after working hours. Use synonyms
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hours
works
. The activities can boost relationships between individuals and their family and friends which eventually will make Fix the agreement mistake
work
work life
balance.
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work-life
bring
more benefits as it can reduce the amount of stress from unproductive Correct subject-verb agreement
brings
time
spent on commuting. Use synonyms
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on family and friends.Use synonyms
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