People in 21st centuries have better quality of life rather than previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The importance of
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of living for
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being
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was always debatable and now has become more controversial. Some masses believe that comfort is better than
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era
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. While others reject
this
notion. I strongly agree with the former
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and In
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essay, I will shed
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light
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my opinion
why
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21st
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the 21st
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century
have
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better
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than
previous
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the previous
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one
and
thus
leading to a logical conclusion.
To begin
with, there are myriad of reasons which will
further
elaborate the
trend
but the most preponderant
one
stem from the fact that due to advancement in
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facility and better infrastructure , human being
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able to commute the distance freely in less time frame which was not available in
last
year’s. Another pivotal aspect of the
trend
is that educational platforms are visible online to everyone in the
21ist
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21st
century
.
Learner
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does not have to visit to take admissions.
Moreover
, they can access their syllabus online and learn without
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their attendance offline in institutions. Even though
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educational field become so
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and provide short
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service
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for their students. Learners can attend their
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classes
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anytime and choose
shorter
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program
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according to their
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requirements
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which will add
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their hat and help
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further
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the further
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professional
field
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.
Also
in the current
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people
have more accessible resources of food without going to
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states and
country
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countries
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.
In other words
,
people
can enjoy
variety
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of food in their native place
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just
one
click on the screen.
Hence
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the
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people
are
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the
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favour of
this
trend
.
However
, there are some pitfalls that negate
this
argument. Which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
this
trend
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alarming
one
is that due to the industrialization banking system more
fraduerant
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fragrant
activities
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. Thefts can use just
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information
of
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the person and steal all the money
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is why some
people
are against
this
trend
. To recapitulate, according to the aforementioned above
one
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the conclusion that
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of the living standard in
21st
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century
are many and instrumental.
Nevertheless
, its potential drawback should not be overlooked either.
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