some people believe that a greater difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial than less of a difference. Do you think the advantages of a greater age difference outweigh the disadvantages?
One of the most important factors
for
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in
relationship
between children and Add an article
the relationship
a relationship
parents
is difference
in viewpoint which Add an article
a difference
the difference
mostly
due to their Add a missing verb
is mostly
age
. In this
regard, some people think Correct your spelling
families
familes
in which there is a significant gap between Correct your spelling
families
parents
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parents'
parent's
age
and kids can be more appropriate. By the
contrast, another group say, the less difference, the more Correct article usage
apply
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beneficial
benefical
. In my opinion, Correct your spelling
beneficial
although
it depends on many items, a short distance in age
between family member
is better.
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members
Firstly
, the first
group believed in parents
who are far older than their Correct your spelling
child
child's
childs
can be more successful in their Correct your spelling
children
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connections
conections
, Correct your spelling
connections
therefore
, this
feature can be considered as
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an
advantage
for families. Add an article
an advantage
Accordingly
, father
and mother who are experienced surely can bring up their child in Correct article usage
a father
the
calmer condition. Correct article usage
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For example
, during teenage, older parents
are more relaxed when they face with
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apply
the
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teenagers
problems.
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teenager's
teenagers'
Secondly
, it should be mentioned that people generally are interested in forming friendships or relationships with people who have the same age
. Subsequently
, family members whose age
difference is less might be closer in their ideas or landscapes, particularly when children are youth. For instance
, a father with
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of
age
at around forty probably can understand the difficulties of his son about
sexual matters. Change preposition
in
That is
usually because he can Correct your spelling
distinctly
distincly
remember his own issues yet. Correct your spelling
distinctly
However
, understanding each other is not related to the
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age
and it depends on a lot of various elements such
as culture, Correct your spelling
character
charecter
, mental health and so on.
In conclusion, family relationships and problems are mostly complicated and Correct your spelling
character
needs
a comprehensive study. Change the verb form
need
As a result
, depending on the family condition and the members' traits, this
issue might have completely distinct Correct your spelling
outcomes
outcome
outcoms
. Correct your spelling
outcomes
Nonetheless
, I think based on the objective evidences
fewer margin in family Change the wording
evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
members
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members'
member's
age
is much advantageous
.Correct quantifier usage
more advantageous
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