Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situations such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is best to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some

people

hold the view that actions may be taken to reduce crime,

such

as increasing

police

patrols, promoting anti-crime advertisements, or monitoring suspicious

behaviors

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which may be published on the internet. Others are of the perspective that despite much having been already done, the rate of crime has not reduced significantly

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Today, crime has various aspects, including theft, violent crimes, cybercrimes, and so on. Governments have implemented many issues or policies to protect

people

’s rights. Several countries have implemented online monitoring by

police

, aiding users whose computers are attacked while browsing the internet and providing an immediate response and protection from

police

against hackers. As for cybercrime,

police

publish information to inform citizens about safety strategies. In

this

way,

people

will improve their understanding of these strategies and deter criminals’

behaviors

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. By predicting how criminals attempt to steal money and data over the internet,

such

cybercrimes may be prevented, and

people

’s safety will be guaranteed.

In addition

, many criminals simulate officer or manager contact with students at random by phone, social media etc. Because of that, many platforms

such

as Alipay, Taobao and Tiktok published

many

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information for

protection

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of the public.

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this

way, when

people

calling with a person that

have

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no idea of them, they must

should

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be made sure the identification of them.

Although

many

issue

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issues

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or policy information

have

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been published. They can protect

people

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people's

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safety in some

aspect

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. But some things happened the

people

will be changed,

criminals

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and criminals

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will update their strategies and tools in the future. So,

police

and governments

also

promote their ways to

defense

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it

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. All in all,

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something impossible to protect full

percent

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people

, but do-nothing

people

will be more harmful

then

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do

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something.