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Buying things on the internet, such asbooks, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantages?

#internet #asbooks #air #ticket #groceries
These days, with developing technologies in all aspects of life, there are many discussions about how people
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use and which method is better than others. Doing daily routine online versus implementing requirements in person. In
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 I am going to mention some samples as advantages and disadvantages. Our world was faced with a terrible pandemic called Covid-19 and it leads to a change
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 manners of human life. Eventually, existing of technological platforms to handle folk requirements
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 could do their jobs over the internet.
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 it changes to a way
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 saving time and doing some jobs parallel. With a deeper see
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decreasing body activities can be harmful to human health.
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 to negotiate with each other and makes a gap between them and it can affect
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mental health as well. In my opinion, with online
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 we can not overcome
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all of our requirements and it is necessary to be present somewhere to do our jobs if there are no restrictions. In conclusion, the comparison between these two options is not logical that which one is better and we have to find a way to make a balance between them. In
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 era, for improving efficiency we need to find a solution.
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