You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

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Hi Peter, I hope things are fine on your end. I am thrilled to tell you that I bought a new house in Brampton. It has been three days since I moved into

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house. Earlier, I was living in downtown Toronto. I am so excited to tell you about my new home. It is 11th floor of 4 kings cross. It is a 2BHK apartment with all the amenities and so easy to clean. Whenever the kitchen gets dirty, it is effortless to clean it. I was surprised to know that there are kid parks nearby, and

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where everything is affordable. Oh, I almost forgot to tell you about the Italian restaurant with different varieties of dishes, and you would not believe me that there are over 64 varieties of pizza available. I can not wait to take you over there. I hope we will meet as early as possible, maybe in the coming weekend you can stay for a night, and we will celebrate our reunion and do a gala. See you soon, my dear friend, Regards, Zambo

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

188 words

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