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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Education
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 is the backbone of every nation. Private
schools
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 are doing most of the heavy lifting.
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 I believe that schooling should be free. But government funding will be an excellent method to raise the standard of
education
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 in private institutes.
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, I
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 reckon funding the public is essential, which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. There are several reasons governments should fund the other
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 and support the public ones.
Firstly
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, It is motivation. Since private
schools
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 are purely profit-oriented businesses, they have more reasons to improve their standards and, in most cases, are better equipped than public ones.
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, there was no computer lab in the school where I studied. But
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 was not the case with my younger brother. Meanwhile, the public
schools
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 in my hometown still use the methods of my parents' time.
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, the governments cannot meet the demand. It is practically impossible for governments to have enough public
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 to fulfil the entire country's
education
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 needs.
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, a recent DAWN study reports that the population growth trend in Karachi city requires more than 39000
schools
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 by 2025. While it currently is just a little shy of having 35000
schools
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, of which only 2000 are public.
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, authorities look up to entrepreneurs to cover the gap.
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, entrepreneurs rely on incentives and funding to start new
schools
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. In conclusion, private
schools
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 may not provide free schooling and come across as profit-hungry businesses. Still, these are essential for providing better
education
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 and reaching all the corners of the country.
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