You ordered two items through the internet and you received two different items. Write a letter to the manager: Explain about what you ordered. Ask why the two other items were different. Ask about how he would solve this problem.

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Dear Sir, I am Ahmed Elnahhas and I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction about receiving two different items than what I ordered from your respectful store.

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week I was surfing the internet looking for high-quality modern style back bags,

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one of my friends suggest to visit your online store as you have a good reputation for selling those bags,

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I visited your website and selected what I need

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I submitted the order.

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, I had a long discussion with customer service and I confirmed more than once what I needed exactly to make sure I'm selecting the right products, but still receiving the wrongs items, may I ask you to check why

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happened and how can we prevent

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in future with other customers? In the end, I appreciate your support to solve

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problem and inform me how can I replace those wrong items with the needed ones. Yours faithfully,

Submitted by rehameldweik on Wed Nov 23 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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7 paragraphs

159 words

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