You ordered two items through the internet and you received two different items. Write a letter to the manager: Explain about what you ordered. Ask why the two other items were different. Ask about how he would solve this problem.

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Dear Sir, I am Ahmed Elnahhas and I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction about receiving two different items than what I ordered from your respectful store.

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week I was surfing the internet looking for high-quality modern style back bags,

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one of my friends suggest to visit your online store as you have a good reputation for selling those bags,

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I visited your website and selected what I need

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I submitted the order.

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, I had a long discussion with customer service and I confirmed more than once what I needed exactly to make sure I'm selecting the right products, but still receiving the wrongs items, may I ask you to check why

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happened and how can we prevent

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in future with other customers? In the end, I appreciate your support to solve

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problem and inform me how can I replace those wrong items with the needed ones. Yours faithfully,

rehameldweikWed Nov 23 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

159 words

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It is believed that citizens should pay tax to show their social responsibility. Others believe citizens should take other responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers ahould be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe thay should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviours. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?