Today more and more people are overweight than before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this. What are main affects of this epidemic.

Nowadays,

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obesity has increased dramatically among human beings. In

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essay,I will discuss some of the reasons and consequences of

this

catastrophic phenomenon. Regarding the main reasons,

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untempered junk

food

consumption and the lack of time,which is necessary to accord cooking at home,may lead to

the

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obesity.

Firstly

,the consumption of fast

food

,

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has gained recently a lot of popularity,

specially

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among

teeens

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teens

. In every corner, they are

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bombarded

bombared

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bombarded

with adverts about the delicious taste of

this

faty-sugary

food

.

As a

result

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they

are tempt

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to have dinner outside with their friends,

instead

of eating

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homemade

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home made

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homemade

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food

.

For instance

,

Mc Donald

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McDonald

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,

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can be found everywhere, near schools,

parc

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and parc

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,

therefore

, persuades teens to pester their parents

on

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buying a happy meal.

Moreover

, the lack of time, because parents are working

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extra hours

extrahours

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extra hours

,becoming workaholics, to earn a living in the stiff

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competition

competion

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competition

in their

work

,do not supervise their

enfant's

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infant's

diet.

As a result

, it appeals to them, to offer pocket money, to buy whatever their offsprings want,

compensating

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their

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for their

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absence. Researchers

has

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found that

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the obesity rate among teen has increased because of

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deficient family gatherings and sentimental attachment. As for the consequences of

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impact, the burden that

health

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the health

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system will face and

lack

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the lack

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of

work

labour, should not be neglected.

Medical

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system, due to an

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increase

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number of obese people, later, will encounter financial problems in treating those obese patients, for

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diseases

dieases

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diseases

such

as

:

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diabetes

diabets

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diabetes

, high blood pressure

as

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so on.

in addition

, the labour

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workforce

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work force

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, will automatically decline, due to the fact that youths will not be able to

work

, as their health conditions do not permit.As a consequence, the country's economy may decline and

dwellers

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standard of living

also

will face the negative effects of

this

result. In conclusion,

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fast

food

should be less promoted and

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attention should be turned towards

healthy

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a healthy

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diet.