Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisement tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Advertisement
is the prominent factor to attract mass
community. There are Correct article usage
the mass
people
who believe, Correct your spelling
because
beacuse
Correct your spelling
because
of
, Correct pronoun usage
thisof
advertisement
they are buying unnecessary products. However
, there are few who opine that promotions make them aware about
Change preposition
of
latest
Add an article
the latest
trend
and keep their life healthy. Fix the agreement mistake
trends
As per
my opinion, both are the correct situation as per the current scenario.
Change preposition
In
Majority
of companies, invest Correct article usage
The majority
handsome
Add an article
the handsome
a handsome
amount
in Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
advertisement
of their products. There has been significant growth in Add an article
the advertisement
an advertisement
this
sector. Correct your spelling
Companies
Comapnies
are paying Correct your spelling
Companies
good
amount to celebrities for Add an article
a good
promotion
of products. Correct article usage
the promotion
People
who are
following respective celebrities will Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct your spelling
definitely
definelty
try Correct your spelling
definitely
Add an article
the product
a product
product
,endorsed by them and it is one of the root Fix the agreement mistake
products
cause
that Fix the agreement mistake
causes
people
are buying unwanted things
. Furthermore
, Correct your spelling
announcing
annoucing
a sale is another reason, Correct your spelling
announcing
for instance
, in India, various supermarket has declared a day in week
Add an article
the week
a week
where
Correct word choice
when
people
can get things
on
discounted prices, which leads to purchasing Change preposition
at
things
in bulk to get monetary benefits, lands
Correct word choice
and lands
people
to buy things
which are not necessary.
Advertisement
has benefits as well. It makes people
aware about
the latest trends in the market. Change preposition
of
For example
, several Correct your spelling
companies
comapnies
are Correct your spelling
companies
Correct your spelling
manufacturing
manufactring
Correct your spelling
manufacturing
santary
napkins with the help of promotions of that napkin consumer is aware Correct your spelling
sanitary
about
the new change, Change the preposition
of
how
another Correct word choice
and how
Correct your spelling
company's
comapny's
product is Correct your spelling
company's
more
better than the other. It creates wide options for buyers so Change the word
apply
does
they can make better choices for themselves. Unnecessary verb
apply
Advertisement
creates healthy competition in the market and to survive here companies have to Correct your spelling
deliver
delievr
the goods as per the standards which, Correct your spelling
deliver
Correct your spelling
ultimately
ultimatley
helps the customer only.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
ultimately
people
are highly depend
on promotions. As Replace the word
dependent
advertisement
is the
integral part of our life it has both advantages and Correct article usage
an
Correct your spelling
disadvantages
disadvanges
, Correct your spelling
disadvantages
however
, i
would say thatChange the capitalization
I
,
in Remove the comma
apply
this
world
it is difficult to live without Add a comma
,world
advertisement
.Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
Submitted by himalibhavsar7 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!