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In the future students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers ot TV or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.

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It is irrefutable fact that technology plays paramount
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 in the growth of human
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 in the present world. Which was always debatable now has become more controversial. Some masses believe that in
future
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 studies will be provided online with the usage of high technology and students will not prefer by going
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 on
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 basis while others reject
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 notion. In my opinion, the latter preposition appears more rational
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 and various reasons behind the notion and
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 leading to a logical conclusion.
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reasons which will
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 but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that physical interaction
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the confidence of learner and upgrade their communication skills
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 which cannot be possible in online
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 , when student
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offline
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the offline
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 session and meet with other students and teachers they discuss their matters and it
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language skills. Another pivotal aspect of
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 is that attendance in
offline
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 studies will clear up to doubts of the attendee in their
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 subject.
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, some subjects need laboratory discussions and practice
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 is not possible in the absence of the person from labs and their doubts in
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course
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 will be not covered in online
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.
That is
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 why I would prefer to go with
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 traditional
classes
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Moreover
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, in traditional schools
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students
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 can opt for extra curriculum activities which enhance their interest and boost cognitive skills
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football
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,
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classes
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, long hours in front of
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 make the child obese and
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their eyesight which is not healthy for them.
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, some parents cannot afford
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 technological
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screens
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 and extra space for their
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 daily
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. As most of the family lives in extended families where privacy cannot be expected.
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the
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individuals are in the favor of
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. To recapitulate, according to the aforementioned above one can reach
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the conclusion that
benefits
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the benefits
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 of attending regular
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classes
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 at school are instrumental as
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 promote
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 of the student and
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make
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 them healthy and all the
above mentioned
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 reasons
fully
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 explained in
above mentioned
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 paragraphs.
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