In the future students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers ot TV or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.
It is irrefutable fact that technology plays paramount
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being
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future
studies will be provided online with the usage of high technology and students will not prefer by going Correct article usage
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daily
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a daily
this
notion. In my opinion, the latter preposition appears more rational and
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trend
and various reasons behind the notion and thus
leading to a logical conclusion.
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with, there are myriad of
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but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that physical interaction boost
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up
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which cannot be possible in online classes
. In other words
, when student attend
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the offline
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increase
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increases
up
language skills. Another pivotal aspect of Change preposition
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this
trend
is that attendance in offline
studies will clear up to doubts of the attendee in their concern
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For instance
, some subjects need laboratory discussions and practice that
is not possible in the absence of the person from labs and their doubts in Correct pronoun usage
which
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the practical
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That is
why I would prefer to go with offline
traditional classes
.
Moreover
, in traditional schools student
can opt for extra curriculum activities which enhance their interest and boost cognitive skills Fix the agreement mistake
students
such
as painting, footballs
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football
dance
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and dance
classes
. Furthermore
, long hours in front of screen
make the child obese and Add an article
a screen
also
impact
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impacts
on
their eyesight which is not healthy for them. Change preposition
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In addition
, some parents cannot afford advance
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screen
and extra space for their Fix the agreement mistake
screens
children
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children's
classes
. As most of the family lives in extended families where privacy cannot be expected. Hence
, most of
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the
individuals are in the favor of Correct article usage
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this
trend
.
To recapitulate, according to the aforementioned above one can reach to
the conclusion that Change preposition
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benefits
of attending regular Correct article usage
the benefits
offline
classes
at school are instrumental as it
promote Correct pronoun usage
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self-esteem
also
make
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