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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extend do you think laws are need to make people recycle more of their waste?

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It is urged by some
people
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 that recycling from domestic waste is not adequate and governments should regulate it as a law in
order
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 to increase recycling in households.
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, imposing a law by authority is important, I believe that all residents should have self-regulation to recycle. On the one hand, authorities should restrain
people
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 to reuse things by setting a rule because reusing materials is imperative in
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 to protect the environment.
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,
people
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 have to use their traditional baskets whenever they go to buy some vegetables or for daily consumption
instead
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 of using plastic bags without reusing them.
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, enlightens
people
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 to know how to waste reusable materials in their daily lives.
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, installing different sorts of dustbins in public areas
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 as malls or shopping centres when they go shopping somewhere.
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, self-discipline is
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 important in
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 to protect the environment by reprocessing.
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, selling back the reusable things to the reprocessing centre is a good alternative way of recycling.
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,
people
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 in every household should sell back their household goods
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 as used plastic bottles and glasses to the recycling centre
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 of throwing them recklessly.
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, self-regulating in every home not to waste food is
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 very important.
People
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 should manage cooking a lot of food and wasting biowaste to save not only their money and to protect the environment. To sum up,
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 it is important to set a law for governments in
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 to increase recycling rates, I assert, all citizens should take responsibility to reuse household goods respectively.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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