Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that adolescents should be prompted to
watching
devices Wrong verb form
watch
such
as television, and mobile with the belief, it will help children to educate themselves at home besides
school. Despite there are
some pros of watching videos, in my opinion, it harms more. Wrong verb form
being
This
essay will discuss the reasons behind it, as well as the consequence of it.
The ideas
why people think that watching Fix the agreement mistake
idea
TV
could be an
effective learning is that younger groups develop their learning through hearing faster than any other method. If they watch Remove the article
apply
TV
, they learn through hearing besides
watching. It is the main reason why people think letting children watch TV
is necessary at home and school. For example
, pre-primary schools, in Bangladesh, keep an hour for watching educational videos. It helps schools to keep the children attracted toward class as well as make the class fruitful.
On the flip side, why I believe devices should not include in any way to kids, is firstly
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its
demerits are more huge than advantages. Young people become addicted to the device and become stubborn day by day. Correct pronoun usage
their
Moreover
, they deny doing anything if they don't get a mobile or tv
to watch. This
results
speech delay with problematic eye site. Add the preposition
inresults
fromresults
For instance
, a
research In Bangladesh shows thatRemove the article
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,
speech delay reaches Remove the comma
apply
to
12% within a year, which is an alarming rate for the country.
In conclusion, considering both sides of watching Change preposition
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TV
, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that, screen time should be limited at early
age. Add an article
an early
Correct your spelling
Despite
Dispite
, it can help kids Correct your spelling
Despite
in
faster learning, its cons overweight the benefit, in my view.Change preposition
with
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