A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties.

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Dear

kanwal

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Kanwal

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, I

hope

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you will be fine. As per our earlier discussion, I am writing

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letter to remind

you

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commitment that you made to me when I told you about my tour to Dubai. I would like to thank you for stepping up in the home and steering responsibility for my home. during my tour; you can easily access me via what's app or Facebook. You can

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write me an email, I will check my emails regularly. Stay in touch with me during those days. There is a dog named Tony who needs

a three-time meal meals

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. its food is in the cupboard of the kitchen and does not forget to pour fresh water daily in his pot. In the evening it will take a few minutes to walk and will play with the ball. It is a very amiable pet, I

hope

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it will be frank with you soon. Other chores which you have to do are empty trash on daily basis and switch on lights at night time. Please do not forget to water plants regularly. Once again I am grateful to you for your concern. I

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one day I will

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reward you.

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to meet you soon. Warm wishes,

Sehrish

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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9 paragraphs

208 words

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many people leave their home country and go to other countries to live and work. Why do you think it is happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Some people believe it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree?

The government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatment facility in order to protect the envirnonment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.