Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on it? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Explain your choice by using specific reasons and details.

Nowadays,
children
learning to use
computers
when they are very young. They are consuming many hours on those devices during the day. By spending time on the
computer
, they missing out other experience that
also
is important for them to grow up and be ready for the big world. In
this
essay I will explane the positive and the negative sides about
children
and the use of a
computer
. On the one hand, in the modern world all the households having their own
computer
. On the young age toddlers see their parents sitting behind their
computer
and maybe using it for work or buying products online.
Then
they are going to school, and currently, all schools having
computers
in their classroom. With
computers
everywhere, it is important for
children
to be educated how to use a
computer
.
For example
: essays are made on the
computer
and not by handwriting anymore
therefore
they need typing skills using the internet for research.
On the other hand
, sitting behind the
computer
for many hours it not healthy for
children
. They
also
need to learn to communicate with others in real life.
For example
:
children
need to learn to interact with peers in the classroom, making friends on the playground. That are other essentail qualities what they need to learn and is not possible from behind a
computer
. By missing out those skills they become less socialize people when they are growing up as adults. In conclusion, I believe that
children
need to skills to work with
computers
but, the long hours behind the
computer
having,
also
negative impact on social behavoir of young people and
therefore
not necessary.
Submitted by annemariebloemberg on

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