You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter • Give details of your course • Explain why you need a week off • Say what you want the Principal to do

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Dear SIR or Madam. I am writing in connection with a week off during my educational course between 12 June and 18 June. I am one of the members of the drug development course at White College. Our course consists of two main parts including the technical subjects and the practical training. Because of finishing the first part, I was wondering if I had a week off. To explain more, the first part was complicated with it has a lot of details and points, so revising these notes is important for me.

In addition

due to

being far from my family, I need time to meet them again. I believe

this

time would be a great opportunity to review different tasks and boost energy. Upon request, I would like to seek your permission to have access to a week off. I assure you it would serve a great deal of benefits for me. I hope you take my modest proposal into consideration. Yours faithfully, Mah Ka

Submitted by kargar.mh1992 on Mon May 27 2024

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task achievement

While you have provided a clear reason for needing the week off, it would benefit the letter to be a bit more specific about the practical impact of your absence on your course work and catching up with missed material.

coherence cohesion

There are a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasings, such as 'was complicated with it has a lot of details,' which should be revised for clarity and accuracy.

coherence cohesion

The letter is well-structured, with each paragraph having a clear focus.

task achievement

The tone is formal and polite, suitable for writing to a Principal.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately formal for the context.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

166 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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