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Many people think that it is unnecessary to teach children handwriting skills in this technology age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Technology has influenced every aspect of our life. Some people believe that in
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skills
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 are not required for minors. I strongly agree with
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 statement.
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 essay will discuss the topic and will give a valid conclusion in the end. On the one hand, in
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 modern era, most human
skills
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 including handwriting have been replaced by hi-tech devices. To commence , tablets and smartphones can be used for teaching typing
skills
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 to kids
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 of handwriting which is a time-consuming task.
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, my younger child was unable to learn writing.
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 I started typing with her on a tablet and now she is an expert in her typing with speed and accuracy.
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, children who are unable to write
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, Google has an audio feature which can be used to search for anything by speaking specific words about that item.
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, handwriting requires a lot of time as compared to typing.
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, much of our precious time is wasted on
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 task. To illustrate
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, IELTS candidates appearing in hand-written exams often feel difficulty in completing their tasks within due time compared with computer-based tests which result in bad score records.
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, understanding one's handwriting is a challenging job. for, everyone has a different style of writing.
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,
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, some people are in favour of teaching writing
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 to their children. In my opinion, typing is the best way of communicating as it is fast, accurate and more practical than writing.

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