Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, the argument of whether

students

should

study

in groups or individually has drawn wide attention in the education sphere.

While

some believe that individual

study

is the most appropriate approach for academic learners, I believe that working with teammates has more

benefits

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impacts on

students

. Advocates of self-learners believe that independent

study

mean

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that more unnecessary time can be saved, and more energy

are

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concentrated on the

study

project itself. If there were

less

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teamwork

assignment

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assignments

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,

students

would be more likely to spend more

times

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time

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on

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apply

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improving their individual scores rather than going through the motions in teamwork presentations.

For instance

, it is common for poor

students

get

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average high scores in collaboration

works

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, as the efforts everyone paid are not equal.

On the other hand

, the reason for people who believe teamwork

study

is more effective may involve the recognition that independent

students

who

study

alone are not good at social skills.

By contrast

, those who have cooperated with others have known thoughts from different perspectives. They tend to be more responsible and patient which are the important factors in coping with other people in their future career life,

as well as

giving them more confidence in social networking skills.

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the leaders in

study

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the study

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group

for example

, they are responsible

to guide

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for guiding

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the whole group

work

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to work

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in harmony,

this

precious experience has

positive

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a positive

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influence

in

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their profession selection.

To sum up

, despite the benefits of individual

study

offer

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offering

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concentration and self-improving skills, I believe that

group

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the group

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working method has more positive impacts on both

students

’ academic and professional

path

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.