More and more students are going to another country for higher education. Do the advantage of this outweigh disadvantage?

Globally,there has been a rapid increase in the
numbers
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of people that go to university in a foreign
country
. In my own opinion,I think the advantage outweigh the disadvantage if
one
is leaving a developing
country
for a developed
country
.
This
essay will be discussing the reasons and benefits as well as the downside.
Firstly
, the search for new knowledge has been a great deal for some individuals and they feel the need to achieve
this
by travelling to another
country
especially if that
country
is specialized in the aspect they want to
study
.
For instance
, my cousin always want to
study
medicine since childhood,so when he was of age, he researched about it and found out that some countries like India,USA and Germany have the best doctors and he decided to school in the USA in another for him to learn from them and practice in his
country
with the newly acquired skills.
In addition
, some people
also
think that it is more convenient,easier and faster to school outside their geographical location.
For example
,in Nigeria to
study
nursing is up to 5years and the syllabus is so tight that it is difficult for
one
to work and
study
at the same time but in Ghana, the nursing program is 4years and their syllabus is developed so that their students can work and
study
at the same period, for
this
,
reason
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a Nigerian may think of studying nursing in Ghana rather than their home
country
.
However
, there is
also
some disadvantage of school outside
one
country
,
such
as finance,cultural shock, loneliness etc.The amount of money spent on schooling aboard is alarming because most universities preferred being paid in dollars and
this
can cause financial bother for the family.
Furthermore
, the difference in cultures
are
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always frustrating sometimes and difficult to adapt
lastly
, loneliness terms to occur especially in
one
's
first
year because
one
is still trying to adapt to new changes. In conclusion,
although
they are negative effects of studying in another
country
, if
one
is determined and has good family support, it
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better schooling outside
one
country
to acquire more skills in different aspects of life.
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