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#information #features #comparisons
This
 diagram illustrates a mechanism
which
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 purified
water
 is produced from
sea
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 by extracting salt and other materials from seawater and goes to a
water
 supply system. Mainly, there are 4 stages in
this
 purification process, while all of the main areas are connected to each other with pipes. In the
first
 2 stages, there are
also
 2 other pipes which
provides
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 a return to the
sea
.
Process
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 starts by taking saltwater from
sea
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the sea
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, and
this
 liquid flows through a pipe to
first
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 filter. There, some of the
water
 backwashes and the rest
continues
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 up to another area, where
water
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 goes through a filter from a
high pressure
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 place to a low one. In
this
 part,
water
 molecules
past
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pass
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 through the gaps, while salt and other impurities are not able to do it, and these elements return to
sea
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. After that, there is
a
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last
 stage where
water
 makes a contact with 3 materials: lime, chlorine, and fluoride.
Lastly
,
this
 drinkable
water
 flows through
a
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last
 pipe to
a
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storage, where it stays for a while, and
then
 continues to
integrated
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the integrated
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water
 system.
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