some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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different topics these days. Some
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argue that sharing much
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and business, while others
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to be shared freely. I believe sharing
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and critical thing to do. Sharing
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make
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it more
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useful
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useful
and increase its value. Because more
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information
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its value as
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knowladge
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knowledge
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increases
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Einstein
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Einstein
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, lab results, and
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are available for all scientists
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and
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and
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result
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in many inventions and
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use of
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which are now
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of physics. So, if
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share their
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may contribute a lot
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increasing and developing
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community.
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, stealing
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researches
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is becoming
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the easy
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thing to do, as nowadays some
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in the scientific community have no morals and
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they usually steal other individual's
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as
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belong to them,
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many scientific journals are fraud journals
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when you submit your research aiming for its publication, you will find your
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being published in another journal with different names.
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become one of the largest problems of sharing
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for free. In conclusion, sharing
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and
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is important, because it may make a lot of change in the researcher's communities.
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, some
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tend to steal
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belong
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to them. I strongly agree we must share
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despite
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everything
everthing
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everything
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because it
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contribute
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contributes
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developing new
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and different
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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