In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree with this option?
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the number
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. I agree with that statement and, in my opinion, if the government accept that rule, it will save Use synonyms
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in supermarkets, where they can spend much more money. Use synonyms
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first
firt
stage of diabetes!
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people
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healthy
helthy
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healthy
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schools
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schools
food
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during
the whole day. That leads to Change preposition
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increase
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an increase
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in a
a
number of students with overweight, Change the article
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have heart-diseases
heart-diseases
and diabetes. Usually, their meal is free and it is included in the school payment, but if a student wants to have a healthy lunch, he or she needs to pay extra, while it has to be vice versa.
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heart diseases
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place in a significant number of countries. The responsibility of it lays down on the government due to they usually do not really care about Linking Words
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