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Some people think that online reading materials are better for children. Others argue that traditional paper-based resources are better. Discuss and give your opinion.

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Online reading
materials
 and Offline reading
materials
 are two different things each of them has a different benefit. In Online material, people read
books
, and news on the way to their office or their specific work or even while travelling. Offline
materials
 like
paper
-based recourses
such
 as
books
 and newspapers are very hard to handle along with their other things.  In online material, people not only get used to the internet but
also
 get useful to browse anything. In earlier times there was not an upgrade version of technologies which were not made. Now in the 21st century, many technologies have been made so that it can be easy for them to go. During Covid,
children
 were studying online and many other apps were made so that they do not lack in studies. It is useful as well as harmful for
children
 to
use
 online reading material as it affects their health and their eyesight. It gives them to strain their eyes to look at the screen. The
paper
-based resources are better because they will help them to read and mark in the textbook at the time and while using online material it will be difficult for them to mark and make notes on it. The
paper
-based material
also
 produces harmful inks which will affect
children
 and will give them skin infections.
Paper
 material can be useful but at the same time can be harmful to
children
. The positive insight of the online material is that they can
use
 download it as anytime and can
use
 it later for their reference. It can
also
 be useful to learn about new technologies and will release the work of the parents and teacher and can refer to various
books
 which are available online. The negative impact of the
paper
 material leads to skin problems as they have many intoxicants while printing
books
. Major problems occur like cutting
of
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 tree trunks for producing
paper
 which lessens the trees in our surroundings and which not only produces pollution but
also
 troubles of not getting fresh air. My opinion of
this
 topic may differ due to circumstances, I believe that online
books
 can be more useful for
children
 for their studies and people who cannot afford
this
 should be given any source of technology so that it will be easier to gain information through different sites and platforms. I would recommend and give a conclusion on it like they should
use
 online reading
materials
 rather using
paper
 material for their studies so that it will be informative for
children
 who are keen to learn new words and phrases and know what is happening in the world get a collective knowledge on
this
.
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