Young people are leaving their home from rural areas to study at work in cities. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

These days, more and more
people
are
develop
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their
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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. The youth generation, who are leaving their families and homes for
further
study and better job opportunities, go from regional parts to
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megacities
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cities
. Personally, I completely agree with
this
view and suppose that
this
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initiative
intiative
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initiative
of
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young
people
can bring about more benefits for
lead
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standard
life
compared to any drawbacks it might bring. On the one hand, home leaving can be effective
of
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young
people
for
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to
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study on
job
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purpose.
First
of all, they
are
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broadened their communication skill. When they go to towns, they will be
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to meet new
people
,
know
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and know
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food
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about food
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and culture.
For instance
, when
people
move
on
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from
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one region to another region, they recognise new
people
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in this
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area and
also
know
that
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culture, food and tradition. For
this
reason, they will increase
communication
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their communication
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skill
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skills
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and knowledge.
Secondly
, it has been realized that megacities
gives
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better quality
life
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of life
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. If
people
come
in
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to
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cities
, they will take higher study, job
opportunity
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opportunities
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, social safety, health
factities
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facilities
and so on.
That is
why leaving home is beneficial
of
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youngsters
young stars
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young stars
.
However
, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed
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the disadvantages.
Leave
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Leaving
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home can be the main cause
homesickness
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of homesickness
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because young
people
cannot easily
adopt
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adapt
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new
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to new
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cities
environment. It's hard to adjust
new
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to new
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Friends, food and cultural differences. Another way is that it is difficult to start
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life
. In
other word
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, when you go from the countryside to big
cities
, you will face different types of problems
such
as commuting to new
people
, finding accommodations and so on.
This
is so
much
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challenging for a new person at that place. To conclude, I strongly believe that broadening social bonds on spending standard lifestyle
outweigh
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any of the minor drawbacks that could result from causing homesickness and challenging
life
.
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