Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.

The discussion regarding the using

computers

in education has sparked a heated debate. Some people opine that it is

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tendency, while there are others who assert that it

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gloomy ramifications. I concur with the notion that

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use of

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in teaching is beneficial direction.

This

essay will examine both sides.

To begin

with, while

computers

established

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in education to facilitate

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their learning management system,

students

are getting addicted to

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game that does not involve real physical movement.

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, people who

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sedentary habits are

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risk of breathing problems and other high blood

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diseases.

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, we can notice that most of the

students

who

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problem with

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, generally because of technical gadgets.

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, the most positive thing about

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computer

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is the

technological

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skills that

students

acquire with

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easy access to

computers

. For

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the

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reason

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,

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research reported that young children have

exceptionally

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higher ability to develop new skills than

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adults, due to the fact that neurons in their brains tend to connect fast.

For instance

, a child who used to open a

computer

for a long time has

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elevated opportunity to master dealing with technology.

Furthermore

,

computers

allow

students

to explore their passion for technology, which might lead them to pursue higher studies in

this

major.

As a result

, communities will have experts in important fields like information technology or network programming. To conclude, as a matter of fact, excessive usage of

computers

in education is an incredible opportunity for

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students

to develop sophisticated

technological

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knowledge and will be useful for their future.