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Giving lectures in auditorium to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching, with the technology available today there is no justification for it; and everything should be done online. Do you agree or disagree with this statement and give your opinion.

#lectures #auditorium #numbers #students #technology #justification
Technology
 has revolutionized different pedagogies and teaching as a whole. Nowadays we can see several methods are used in online platforms where
pupils
 are engaged in an effective way so that they can enhance their skills and abilities as well as academic performances.
Therefore
, as per my understanding,
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the method
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 of educating
pupils
such
 as providing long lectures in class is a very old way. So, I strongly agree that online, digital and technological methods should be utilized for
this
 purpose. To commence with, computers and laptops can be provided to learners to foster an environment of learning and education. To elaborate, in recent times, every student is capable of educating himself or herself through different digital modes
such
 as youtube and many useful educational websites.
For example
, research conducted by the Department of Education in the United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural
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 (UNESCO), in the year 2018, showed that usage of educational websites by learners
have
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has
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 increased
more
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 than 45
percent
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 in the
last
 decade.
Hence
, it can be well understood that teenagers who are studying in
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institutions should be given an opportunity to get
acquaint
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acquainted
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 with
such
 gadgets and devices for their educational growth.
Furthermore
, smartphones have become so common that every individual whether living in
urban
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an urban
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 setting or in
rural
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a rural
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 area, is using
it
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them
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. To explicate, nowadays,
this
 device has become part of our life. So it can be provided to students so that they may utilize
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it in
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 a positive manner.
For instance
, scholarly findings by the
department
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Department
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 of Education and
Technology
in
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at
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 the University of Sydney expressed that
learning
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the learning
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of
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pupils
 can highly be improved with the assistance of
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smartphones
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smart phones
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smartphones
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.
Thus
,
Technology
 may have a huge impact on the development of
pupils
. To conclude, learners could be provided
a
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culture and environment of
technology
 where their several skills can be polished in order to be successful in their future
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endeavor
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endeavours
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.
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