Some people thinkthateveryoneshouldbevagetarian ,becausewe do not need to eat meat to have healthy diet,to what extend do you agree or disagree

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One of the most controversial topics nowadays in the
food
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industry is the approach we have to
food
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either vegetarian or non-vegetarian.Some people believe that all of us must follow a plant-based diet because there is no necessity for consuming an animal-based diet for fitness.I completely disagree with
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notion
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mentioned about what we eat.
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of all,Even though we get all kinds of nutrients from cultivated crops ,the main drawback is their availability.
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,in the western ,world they have a wide variety of fruits which are difficult to grow in eastern countries and
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wise versa .Some nations have non-fertile lands so they are not used for agriculture.As demand escalates the product should be available,which is hard in
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scenario.On the other ,hand animals are widely available throughout the world.
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,meat is more cost-effective than vegetarian
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.
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,
milk
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is essential for kids.when we substitute
milk
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with plant-based
milk
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,is it possible for every mother to get
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from seeds as it is not economical?To get the protein we have to consume seeds and for healthy ,fats one has to take dry fruits.Animal-based
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is generally considered cheap because of its wide variety of creatures and most of which are budget-friendly. In conclusion,by taking into consideration the above-aforementioned points,I strongly disagree that for fitness we should take plant-based
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.The main reasons are available and
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cost.
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