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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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With rapid technological development,
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 vehicles are becoming a reality, and within a couple of decades, all
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 will run without the intervention of a human driver. I believe that
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 will bring far more
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 than possible drawbacks they have.
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 with the drawbacks,
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 pose some risks, including accidents and casualties, should the technology malfunction. Since the vehicles would be run and controlled by software and technology, the risk of devastating accidents due to bugs or hacking could not be eliminated. It will make us more susceptible to hackers and software glitches. An accident, in which a woman died, caused by a
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 car while still in beta mode, caused a great uproar a few years ago.
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, not all roads, especially those in poor nations with ditches, holes, and insufficient road signals are suitable for those automated
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 to run smoothly.
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, technology-made mistakes are astronomically fewer than man-made blunders when it comes to road safety and casualties, and
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 is where
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 automobiles can make a significant improvement. Though we point out a single accident made by a
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 car, human drivers are responsible for hundreds, if not thousands, of casualties each day all around the world. With the introduction of automated
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, accidents would reduce remarkably making roads safer for all. On top of that, millions of hours could be saved each day since we would no longer need to sit behind the wheel. It will increase our productivity and boost the national economy. In conclusion,
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 vehicles have many great
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 including road safety and economic
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, and it is expected that we could eliminate the software-related issues to reap the maximum
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 of
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 marvellous technology.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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