The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate

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the best tactic to address the environmental global issue is to raise the

fuel’s

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fuel

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price

. I do not consider myself an advocate of

this

idea.

Firstly

, without a shadow of a doubt, increasing the

price

of fuel is not the optimal approach to deal with

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contaminated international problems. It is obvious

to

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note that inelastic

demand

for oil, since almost all

vehicles

cross-border

also

run on gasoline.

Moreover

, even if the

fuel’s

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fuel

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price

is criminally expensive, citizens all around the world

demand

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consumption.

For example

, recently in Vietnam,

although

the government prohibitively increased the combustion of fossil

fuels’

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fuels

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price

, residents still relentlessly purchase

this

product. On the grounds that going to work and school is an essential

demand

for either adults or adolescents on a daily basis.

Therefore

, raising the

fuel’s

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price

is not

the

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efficient method to resolve the contaminant problem.

Secondly

, while

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ineffective impact of the increase in the

price

of fuel is widely acknowledged, there is a wealth of more

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far-reaching

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alternatives to cope with the environmental issues. To be specific, electric

vehicles

are powered by renewable energy registered from nature, which does not influence the air quality of the environment.

For instance

, Vinfast, which is a

well known

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car maker in Vietnam, has an

eco - friendly

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system.

In addition

, it either meets

a

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demand

for the move of inhabitants or has a bad effect on the air quality of the contaminants.

As a result

, the use of electric

vehicles

is one of the effective solutions with a view to reducing carbon footprint, which can deal with the environmental problem. To sum up, it is not vital for the authorities to tackle the world’s

contaminated

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issue by increasing the

fuel’s

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fuel

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price

.

Instead

, utilizing

eco - friendly

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vehicles

can be an effective choice to handle the environmental problem.