Some people think that students should play more team sports, such as football and volleyball, rather than individual sports, such as running and swimming. Do you agree or disagree?

The number of individuals suggests that adults should do physical

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in a big community,

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as basketball or hockey rather than single

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or athletics. From my point of ,view the

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way is preferable and effective and in

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I will discuss these two viewpoints in a depth. Nowadays the majority of people prefer doing outdoor

activities

with their family or friends

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because it is more interesting and exciting to do sport in a big community. On another ,side there would not be any problems with how to play or do some kind of difficult movements during the game, because others are always ready to help each other. For ,example the scientists of the physical university TDOLLA said that «people should do more sports

activities

,especially in a big company, because inside

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society everyone will try to be the

first

and

this

is normal, especially in adolescence».

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other humans want to do some kind of experience by themselves, lonely

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because it helps them to become calm and relaxed. There is no secret that

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all people are different, which means their way of thinking varies too. For instants, there would be situations when individuals want to be alone during sports

activities

because it helps them to be independent.

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kind of sport can be the most common choice, especially for people who are into working lonely. In conclusion, sports help everybody to be healthy and energetic and if they do it in teamwork the exorcising process would be more enjoyable.