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The self-driving cars is getting popular in the world. Do you agree or disagree?

In our modern life, technology has been developing day by day.
The autonomous
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 machines are getting famous around the world.
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, it has been helping
to
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humans which is safety. I completely
agree
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 idea because they
are
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protect the
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environment
enviroment
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environment
 which is due to using carbon-based transport. On the one hand,
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 trend of
cars
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 will useful for
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mankind
 because it helps
for
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people
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 which is decrease
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the accident
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accident
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accidents
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 because when drivers
driving
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 the car it might
be interrupt
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 distractions to them.
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, the
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safe
 driving will not look
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 situation because they always control by computer and
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 way is
safeter
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safer
safety
safe
 for
people
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.
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, has cut down 14 % of fatal collisions over the
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 6 years in the USA.
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, more
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scientists
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 suggest that using widely
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 type of
cars
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 because of
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 way is more
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beneficial
benefical
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beneficial
 for
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the individual
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individual
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individuals
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 which
is preserve
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 their safety life.
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, driverless
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 may be worthwhile
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environment
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
 which is protect come
out
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deterimental
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detrimental
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substance
substances
subtance
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substances
 from
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the automobile
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automobile
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automobiles
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 because
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 vehicles use
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battery
better
bettery
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better
.
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, the  effects of pollution cause global warming. In autonomous vehicles,
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 is avoided.
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, when
people
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 tried
with
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driving, it helps
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humans for relaxing.
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,  many countries with clean air have few
cars
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, so they prefer to use driverless
cars
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 because most of the pollution comes from
cars
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. In conclusion, we can say that all machines are useful for
people
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. But in my opinion, driverless
cars
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 are more beneficial for the environment because when the environment is clean,
people
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 breathe cleaner air and they live longer.

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