The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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fuel

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is the best approach to address

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global environmental issues. From my perspective, I consider myself an opponent of

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idea.

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, without a shadow of a doubt that raising the

price

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of

gasoline

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is not the optimal tactic to deal with the

problems

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of the

environment

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. Because there are numerous

vehicles

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running on gas, they create an elastic demand for fossil

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fuel

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.

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, even if the

price

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of

gasoline

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climbs significantly, residents still have a great demand for it.

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, in Vietnam, the state has decided to raise the cost of fossil

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recently, but the Vietnamese still buy

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, even more quickly, despite its

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, which results from the unbearable need of people to go to school or work.

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, increasing the

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fuel’s

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price

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doesn’t make any difference because of the ever-increasing number of automobiles.

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, I think that increasing the cost of

fuel

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is not the ideal method to resolve the current

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environment’s

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issues. While

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ineffective impact of the increase in

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fuel’s

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price

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is widely acknowledged, there is a wealth of more far-reaching alternatives to address environmental

problems

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, one of

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is using electric

vehicles

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. Owing to running on renewable energy,

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electric

vehicles

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do not emit

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greenhouse gasses. For

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reason, they do not jeopardize the quality of

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the surroundings

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. To cite an example, Vinfast is a famous car

make

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in Vietnam, its 4-wheeled

vehicles

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have an electrical system which is environmentally friendly. Its products not only meet the demand of the people

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but

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do not affect the

environment

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atmosphere harmfully.

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, using electric

vehicles

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can be the best solution to environmental pollution and

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way to protect the

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. In conclusion, as I have proved, raising the

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of

gasoline

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is not

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excellent approach to

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with the

problems

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of the

environment

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.

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, there is a wealth of solutions for these

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instead

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, and one of those which I have mentioned above is using

electrical

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automobiles.